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Old 03-29-2007, 04:59 PM
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Im a beginner in photography, and Im taking digital photography. I went outside to take some random pictures and so I dicided to take a photo of these car. Tell me what you think of it.


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Old 03-30-2007, 03:15 AM
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You have a b/w partial photo of a car, or a photo of part of a car. So I think the question is, why crop it there, or why frame it in the camera there? It's a matter of subject; the center is a gray fender, the bottom a patch of black. Some of the top is car chrome; I'm struggling to see why this shot this way? The photo looks OK, viewing the larger image. Is this a test of the camera? The camera works. Photographer may want to think about next subject in terms of composition, viewer interest, story telling, etc. Look around the site, asking yourself why that photo interests you, and the next one doesn't? And take 20 photos of a car, all different, and search for reasons to keep or chuck each one. Then look at this one again.
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