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Old 03-23-2007, 02:32 AM
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Hi, I am a newbie here! Here's my baby boy, Isaac. I am having some issues with my monitor so hopefully the colors are ok to you all.

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Old 03-23-2007, 08:06 AM
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SugarMama,

Does your monitor say "cool?" A little warmth in the skin tone would add life to this good photo. Turning the head just a little to get some light on both eyes brings more individuality, and interest. Just enough turn without bringing on 'squint.' Try full headshot, too. I like the crop here, face is strong. Experiment as much as possible.
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Old 03-23-2007, 04:17 PM
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What an adorable subject! What time of day did you take this? It looks as if it was fairly bright outside, which may have put a little too much light on one side of his face. Nice DOF for the blurry background and closeup composition. With such a cute model available to you, I'm sure you can try lots of things to practice.
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Old 03-23-2007, 04:29 PM
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My monitor is a wreck...LOL I edited this picture a few weeks ago and then when i emailed it to a couple of other people and saw it on their monitors, I realized mine is probably way off. Which means I am over/under editing in photoshop **SIGH**

We've tried calibrating the screen but I think I'm just going to have to buy a new one.
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Old 03-24-2007, 01:07 AM
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I think just the brightness needs to be downed a bit but other than than I really like how the light divides his face in half and how the blue in his jacket brings out his eyes.
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all the technical stuff aside the timing of the shot makes it great, getting that look that gives emotional strength to a photo is the real art. A face i am sure we are going to see alot more off
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