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It was quite foggy that Day but I still think that this Shot turned out quite nicely..

What do you guys think?

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Old 01-18-2008, 11:02 AM
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Luftschiff,

Sort of an abstract silhouette, because the angle doesn't clearly say "birdhouse." Not enough detail to be an architectural depiction of an aviary. Tell more about the way you saw this then, and the part of the photo you think is best.
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Good concept but I think this is a definite re-shoot situation. I think its a great opportunity for a HDR shot but with a higher angle.
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Old 01-21-2008, 09:55 AM
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Thanks for the Critique.


@ jiminyClickit: I like how its framed by the tree and i like the Bird House itself..

and Sid: I will try that.. Just need to find something to rest the camera on because I'm still waiting for some money to come in so I can get my tripod :P
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