#1 (permalink)  
Old 01-16-2008, 03:34 AM
KLNYC's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 324
Default 9/11 WTC steel beam.

Hi folks,

I was at Liberty State Park, NJ over the weekend and I came upon this big chunk of steel beam. This steel beam was twisted like a pretzel I didnt take much shots at it. It was very emontional just be near it.

One of the 9/11 "I" beam.
__________________
Nikond D300 w/grip
Nikkor 24-70f2.8 G, Nikkor 85 f1.8 Sigma 30f1.4, Sigma 105 f2.8 Macro,Simga 10-20 EX HSM, SB-600
My Flickr
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 01-16-2008, 03:48 AM
Canadian Mum's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Saskatchewan, Canada
Posts: 1,594
Default

I like the angle of approach.
Very dramatic.
I can only imagine the emotion felt when viewing such an item
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 01-16-2008, 11:02 PM
XpLoiT's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Sydney
Posts: 207
Default

love the angle and the colors i think its awesome, the change i would maybe make would be change the apeture to maybe 8 or 11 ?? maybeeeeeeeee id have to see both shots side by side to see if i like the crispness of each one or the blured. good shot
__________________
David Reid Photography / DeviantArt Profile / RedBubble Profile / flickr Profile
Camera: Canon EOS 5D
Lens: Canon EF 17-40 f/4
L USM / Canon EF 70-200 f/2.8ISL USM / Canon EF 24-70 f/2.8L USM / Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 / Sigma 12-24 f/4.5-5.6
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 01-16-2008, 11:27 PM
xxpinballxx's Avatar
Super Moderator
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Cleveland Ohio
Posts: 4,023
Default

This would be great if the sky wasnt so blown but thats a hard thing to over come when shooting what appears to be a nice bright day and the subject is already dark to begin with.
I have to say DOF is throwing me off....open it up a bit more and get the beam up to the flags in focus and let the rest blur behind it.....
I've yet to get to the memorials around NY but would love to see them....Im sure its a site to see.
__________________
D7000, D200, 18-105mm, 35mm 1.8, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8G, 18-200mm, 10-20mm, 105mm 2.8, sb900, Panasonic GF2 Samsung NX100 and lenses and a ton more crap!
RoundboyzPhotography on Flickr
RoundboyzPhotographyBlog
My Twitter
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 01-17-2008, 08:58 PM
jdepould's Avatar
Critique Moderator
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Cleveland, OH
Posts: 5,485
Default

Curvature leads the eye straight to the flag, very nicely done.
__________________
JamieDePould.com + OneYearPhoto.com
Nikon D300, D700, Sony NEX5n
Zeiss 2/25; 1.4/50; 1.4/85

Please read the rules before posting a critique thread. Rules here.
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2008, 05:27 PM
mdwsta4's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Chicagoland
Posts: 649
Default

2nd this comment. go back when the sky is more interesting. the blown out sky ruins the shot.

Quote:
Originally Posted by xxpinballxx View Post
This would be great if the sky wasnt so blown but thats a hard thing to over come when shooting what appears to be a nice bright day and the subject is already dark to begin with.
I have to say DOF is throwing me off....open it up a bit more and get the beam up to the flags in focus and let the rest blur behind it.....
I've yet to get to the memorials around NY but would love to see them....Im sure its a site to see.
__________________
-Matt
Canon 30D, 17-40 f4L, 50 f1.8, Sigma 70-200 f2.8 DG Macro, 30 f1.4, battery grip, 430EX speedlight, Nikon SB-25, wireless transmitters/remotes, various filters, etc, etc.

msm fotki OR msm flickr
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2008, 05:34 PM
kimspics's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Tappahannock, Virginia
Posts: 592
Default

I love this shot. I also like the curvature and how it resembles a path leading to the American Flags. This brings back some aweful memories but also reminds us that this is America and WHAT AN AWESOME COUNTRY WE LIVE IN. Frame it and hold on to it as a keepsake, your children one day will appreciate it.
__________________
Nikon D300
nikkor 18-200mm lens ;
50mm 1.4 prime lens
Nikon coolpix P80
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2008, 05:35 PM
KLNYC's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 324
Default

About the blown' sky...Its kinda hard to do, Im suck at it.
If try rendern the sky, I know the steel beam probably going be black out.
So, I rather get blowin out of the sky then the dark patch on the steel beam(my intention to shoot the beam in th 1st place)..
Thanks for all the comments guys...much appreciated.

ken
__________________
Nikond D300 w/grip
Nikkor 24-70f2.8 G, Nikkor 85 f1.8 Sigma 30f1.4, Sigma 105 f2.8 Macro,Simga 10-20 EX HSM, SB-600
My Flickr
Reply With Quote
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2008, 05:46 PM
mdwsta4's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Chicagoland
Posts: 649
Default

you can go back on a day when the sky isn't overcast, go in during dusk and do a longer exposure, bring a circular polarizer/ND grad filter to help the sky, or do some light painting when it's dark.
not hard to do. taking the best photograph often involves finding that 'moment' to shoot. it can't always be done right then and there. be patient.

Quote:
Originally Posted by KLNYC View Post
About the blown' sky...Its kinda hard to do, Im suck at it.
If try rendern the sky, I know the steel beam probably going be black out.
So, I rather get blowin out of the sky then the dark patch on the steel beam(my intention to shoot the beam in th 1st place)..
Thanks for all the comments guys...much appreciated.

ken
__________________
-Matt
Canon 30D, 17-40 f4L, 50 f1.8, Sigma 70-200 f2.8 DG Macro, 30 f1.4, battery grip, 430EX speedlight, Nikon SB-25, wireless transmitters/remotes, various filters, etc, etc.

msm fotki OR msm flickr
Reply With Quote
  #10 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2008, 05:51 PM
KLNYC's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 324
Default

Thanks Matt...
Let me fiddle around with PS CS3.
__________________
Nikond D300 w/grip
Nikkor 24-70f2.8 G, Nikkor 85 f1.8 Sigma 30f1.4, Sigma 105 f2.8 Macro,Simga 10-20 EX HSM, SB-600
My Flickr
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0