Car + Model

[XpLoiT]

My 2 Loves No.2 by ~xploit on deviantART

Girlfriend loves this pic, what do u think could make it better? it has been cropped so the composition isnt 100% perfect but there was a 50km/h sign coming out of the windscreen. So we decided to cut that out

[Olivier H]

Not bad at all.
You could have been lower down with your camera so that the ditracting background would be hidden behind the car and the girl.

I like the soft lighting. Artificial lighting or was this a cloudy day?

[neilwood]

I think i would have prefered it taken from nearer the middle of the car. That way the model would be looking to the camera and also there would have been more of the car in the shot.

[XpLoiT]

Originally Posted by Olivier H

Not bad at all.
You could have been lower down with your camera so that the ditracting background would be hidden behind the car and the girl.

I like the soft lighting. Artificial lighting or was this a cloudy day?

ta for comments much appreciated, it was a cloudy day and yeah unfortunately it was infront of a construction yard better location next time

[XpLoiT]

Originally Posted by neilwood

I think i would have prefered it taken from nearer the middle of the car. That way the model would be looking to the camera and also there would have been more of the car in the shot.

yeah i was just there as a "2nd photographer" the main photographer was the one who was getting the middle shot :P

but joy prefered this side shot rather than the front on shot, but yeah would be good to get your opinion.

ta for your comments