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Does this look like a woman at a self-serve carwash, seriously? Had I not titled it, what would you have thought? Thanks for pointing out any strengths or weaknesses of the image.
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Old 01-11-2008, 05:40 PM
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lol! The title made me think it would be a little different... maybe a girl in some short shorts soaping down a Hummer! lol! =)

As to your question, no I don't think I would have known what this photo was without reading the title. I don't think I would have known that thing sticking out the side of her was really just a windshield wiper.

The shot is very interesting, and I like the ripple effect caused by the running water on the glass, but for me it is very distracting to have the wiper in the shot. I think it would have been better just to have the ripple effect and then a silhouette of the woman holding the hose. Maybe then I would be able to tell what it was. I think it's the windshield wiper that takes away from really making this photo shine.

I also like that you did it in black and white, I think it adds some interest and using color may have possibly been overwhelming with the ripple effect in the shot.

Very cool shot, thanks for sharing!
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Old 01-11-2008, 05:47 PM
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Thanks Amira for your review and comments. I have to agree about the wiper blade. Say, does anybody know how to remove windshield wiper blades from a black and white photo??!!??
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