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shadowsierra88
03-11-2008, 07:12 AM
My first try at puddleS :) ....

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/van88/2325484865/" title="puddle reflection by shadowsierra88, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3240/2325484865_a97bed834d.jpg" width="500" height="277" alt="puddle reflection" /></a>

Camera: Nikon D40X
Exposure: 0.006 sec (1/160)
Aperture: f/9
Focal Length: 38 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: -1 EV
ISO Speed: 100

1) What is wrong?
2) How can i improve? :)

Saralonde
03-11-2008, 03:32 PM
I think for a reflection to be interesting, you need to have a definite subject in it. I can see it's reflecting something, but I don't know exactly what. The ripples add a kind of texture and I like their positioning, but are not really a reflection.

netbymatt
03-12-2008, 01:40 AM
I can see it's reflecting something, but I don't know exactly what.

My first glance at this image told me something needed to be tweaked, but I couldn't figure it out. Saralonde has it all figured out, the reflection needs to be recognizable.

shadowsierra88
03-12-2008, 04:34 AM
ok noted =) ... I should change the name then ...
btw that stick was suppose to be the stop sign :o