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heespharm
03-05-2008, 08:47 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2326/2309788900_386807574f.jpg

besides a tighter crop... what do ya'll think about improvement..
adityadigaddi
03-05-2008, 10:08 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2326/2309788900_386807574f.jpg

besides a tighter crop... what do ya'll think about improvement..

I would say that colour would look better, as b/w is making it look a bit flat, and maybe a primary subject in the foreground like a branch hanging out, a flower etc.

Cheers
jiminyClickit
03-05-2008, 10:10 AM
heespharm,

Diagonal in that downward direction takes viewer out of frame; flipping left for right helps some. The pure white blowout in background is very much an attention-getter, not in a way that serves the photo. Less uneven light in the b/g would give viewer more chance to appreciate the fern details. A good idea to pursue with many more shots.