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naren
02-04-2008, 06:30 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2307/1721373631_394452cd18.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/narencollection/1721373631/)

This one i took early in the morning, i set out for a walk with my coolpix 4600 and the colors of the sky 'wow' that was a splendid scenery... that was the best shot i got out of my PnS camera...I donno how good is this pic,, but somehow i liked it. And that church tower in the front is a good element in the pic.

bye
naren

mrpolitics
02-04-2008, 09:03 AM
I like the photograph, good colors.

wulf
02-04-2008, 10:28 AM
I've added in a copy of the picture (see FAQ (http://digital-photography-school.com/forum/faq.php?faq=img#faq_flckr) for how to do this) and also scooted it across from "How I Took It" to the critique section. The former is for more details of how you set up the shot and your camera; from the title, it sounds more like you want to pick up some feedback than say "this is how to do it".

BTW, here is the core EXIF data, picked up from your Flickr page:

# Exposure: 0.005 sec (2/409)
# Aperture: f/4.3
# Focal Length: 13.6 mm
# Exposure Bias: 0/10 EV
# Flash: Flash did not fire
# ISO Speed: 50
# Exposure Program: Normal

Wulf

jonnyquest45
02-04-2008, 04:41 PM
color and tone wise i love it sunrise sunset photos are always fun.

a few things i noticed. ill star with the most obvious the car in the lower right is very distracting draws the eye away from the focus of the picture.

there is also a bit of a streetlight in the upper right that could be cloned out or cropped out.

i hope its ok i did a 2 min edit to show you what i mean its not perfect but i think it show you what im talking about

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jpc_productions/2242350664/" title="quick reeddit by jonnyquest45, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2070/2242350664_acdc11c547.jpg" width="500" height="374" alt="quick reeddit" /></a>

naren
02-04-2008, 07:41 PM
Thanks to all,

First of all I'm sorry having posted the thread in the wrong place. Thanks for Correcting. I had to post the original pic without any edits cos I wanna get the best feedback and then redo the corrections and compare both.

Thanks all for your time and feedback.