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Luftschiff
01-30-2008, 06:22 AM
Here is one I took yesterday..
I like it but I was wondering if there is anything that could be improved?


Shot with:
Aperture: f/5.6
Exposure: 1/20
Iso: 1600


<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/manuel_niederl/2227736039/" title="Football by Manuel Niederl, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2069/2227736039_3ab60e3187.jpg" width="500" height="353" alt="Football" /></a>

geotography
01-30-2008, 04:01 PM
Hi Luftschiff,

Nice work. It is interesting to view. If it were my photo, I would crop on the right just to the left of the illumination. I just don't think the first guy is necessary in the photo. The players create a nice diagonal line. Why did you need to shoot at an ISO of 1600? There is some noise in the photo.

wulf
01-30-2008, 05:16 PM
I think it would be improved with a bit more light on the "players" and the light reflecting in the background toned down.

I agree with Geotography about cropping out the blurred partial player in the bottom right corner and would also want to consider an angle that spreads the remaining players out across more of the photo.

Wulf

netbymatt
01-31-2008, 01:16 AM
I like the perspective in your photo, although the player in the lower right is a little distracting. I think the reflections that you've got on the players from the back light would work very well if you had a little more light on the players.

Nathan deGargoyle
01-31-2008, 10:40 PM
Try focusing one player further away.

Luftschiff
02-01-2008, 08:53 AM
Thanks for the advice.. The high Iso is needed because the room this is in has very bad lightning and I didnt have a tripod at the time I shot this (I just got mine yesterday)