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Old 12-11-2009, 06:10 AM
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This was a lucky shot on vacation in Bali. I was taking photos of some Buddha statues when this dragonfly landed right in front of me. I didn't have a macro, so I just shot this with the 50mm lens I had on the camera.

I'd like to know what I could have done better in the moment, and also what I can do with the image in PS to improve the shot.

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Old 12-11-2009, 12:37 PM
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Nice.. the composition very interesting.. the tones are well balanced.
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Old 12-11-2009, 07:20 PM
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A closer crop so the the lil buger is filling the frame more
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Great stuff! Maybe a tighter crop will help, right now, the thing on which the dragonfly is sitting takes toomuch attention.
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Great advice - thanks. I'll have a go at a closer crop and see how it looks. I agree that the fence post is too distracting. I had another angle where the eyes were more visible, but the abdomen kind of drooped to one side.
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