#1 (permalink)  
Old 08-08-2009, 12:47 AM
nanbil's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Cornwall, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 69
Default Too Much of a Good Thing?

Exposure 1/588, Aperature f4, ISO 200

Have reduced shadow, boosted saturation, increased sharpness, all just a little. And brightened it about 25%.

Did I go to far? Is weed fake looking?

Swan on Gananoque River
__________________
Pentax K20D
DA 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6 AL II

"Practice Random Kindness and Senseless Acts of Beauty"
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 08-08-2009, 01:26 AM
deudbus's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Missouri
Posts: 415
Default

I personally think it looks good, but I think I would probably also crop off the top half or so of the shot. There isn't really anything going on up there that adds to the shot.
__________________
Scott

Canon Rebel XSi, kit lens, Tokina AT-X 100mm f/2.8 PRO D Macro
http://www.flickr.com/photos/deudbus/
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 08-09-2009, 02:34 PM
nanbil's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Cornwall, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 69
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by deudbus View Post
I personally think it looks good, but I think I would probably also crop off the top half or so of the shot. There isn't really anything going on up there that adds to the shot.
Ya, I know what you mean. Have done that and lose a sense of movement that I am trying to achieve. Your comment has got me thinking maybe if could bring out some of the weed & lily details (colour, sharpness) that might help,

Thanks deudbus
__________________
Pentax K20D
DA 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6 AL II

"Practice Random Kindness and Senseless Acts of Beauty"
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 08-10-2009, 11:36 PM
inkista's Avatar
Gear Geek Girl
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego, CA
Posts: 9,168
Default

This is a totally minor thing, but it's bugging me--there's all that purple fringe going on in wake of the swan--might want to take a few seconds to deal with it.

I like the overall composition, and don't think that cropping would necessarily strengthen the image.
__________________
I shoot with a Canon 5DmkII, 50D, and S90, and Pansonic G3. flickr stream and equipment list
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 08-11-2009, 12:26 AM
no.absolutes's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DNTN, NC
Posts: 737
Default

I think a closer crop would be nicer, otherwise, the photo reminds me of a fairy tale. The Swan Princess, maybe?
__________________
Becky - flickr - N-A Photography
Nikon D3000 ~ 18-55mm, 55-200mm, 50mm lenses
Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the "present." ~Kung Fu Panda
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 08-11-2009, 03:40 PM
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Canada
Posts: 96
Default

I agree it needs a crop.

Mike.
__________________
Mike's Flickr
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 08-11-2009, 04:05 PM
Gaurav Prabhu's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Mumbai
Posts: 350
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by deudbus View Post
I personally think it looks good, but I think I would probably also crop off the top half or so of the shot. There isn't really anything going on up there that adds to the shot.
Agreed.
When the image loaded in my browser, first I thought it was some shot of planet or moon then when I scrolled down did I see the real subject.
__________________
ShutterTux | Flickr

"I gaze at the sunset with the woman I love & think f/8.0 at 1/250"
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 08-11-2009, 07:31 PM
KJ74's Avatar
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Fife, Scotland
Posts: 16
Default

Hi, love the shot & also the textures and colours in the water, but I think cropping some of that out so my eye is drawn straight to the swan would improve it. I always have a hard time deciding between which details I love and which I should crop out to make the photo work.
__________________
K.J.

Canon EOS 450D
http://www.flickr.com/photos/40980731@N07/
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Tags
bird, river, swan, water

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0