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    Default Northern Mockingbird

    Taken at Adjuntas Puerto Rico, Canon 7D, Bigmos, Manfrotto monopod.



    Camera Maker: Canon
    Camera Model: Canon EOS 7D
    Lens: 150-500mm
    Image Date: 2012-11-24 12:37:48 +0000
    Focal Length: 500mm
    Aperture: f/10.0
    Exposure Time: 0.0016 s (1/640)
    ISO equiv: 1600
    Exposure Bias: none
    Metering Mode: Matrix
    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)
    White Balance: Manual
    Flash Fired: No (enforced)
    Orientation: Normal
    Color Space: sRGB
    GPS Coordinate: undefined, undefined
    Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows

    Hope that helps.
    Last edited by PhantomMedic; 11-30-2012 at 05:23 PM.
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    You may want to read the rules/guidelines for posting in the critique section. We do ask for a bit more information to help out! Thanks for checking them out and editing your post!

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    Nice perch and background. I'll offer a few suggested changes...
    Number one is to eliminate the halo that is showing behind the head. Use a small brush and clone in the background. Next I would change the crop a little and add a tad bit to the top, just enough space to be about half of the bottom. I would also remove the leaf tip that is at the bottom left, as I find it distracting. Hard for me to judge on my iPad, but I feel another round of sharpening is needed on the bird itself, especially the head area.
    I'd also suggest trying your lens at f/8 instead of f/10, most shooters I know that use that lens all have found the sharpest images to be at f/8. For the year I used the same lens on Nikon cameras that was the sweet spot for me also.
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    Default halo, etc

    The halo around the head is distracting.
    I would like to see some highlights in the bird's left eye.
    I find the background a bit to bright, and would prefer if the background highlights were taken down a bit.

    In my opinion, the image could use to be cropped a bit on the left side...eliminating the leftmost out of focus aloe leaf...this would also put the birds head into the 1/3rd region.

    The detail of the bird is excellent. Overall composition is good.

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    What do you want help with? We do ask that ask something specific. Composition? Lighting? Anything?

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