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Old 09-28-2011, 04:55 AM
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This is my boy, soaking up the sun. :)

do you think the subject takes up too much of the picture? i'm trying to practice close-ups, and this is the best i've come up with so far.

Taken June 14/2011
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Old 09-28-2011, 12:49 PM
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please review the rules/guidelines for the critique section and then edit your post with the missing information. Thank you!
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Old 10-06-2011, 07:31 PM
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Hi there...
I don't think the picture is too close, but I think I might like it better if he was more to the right and down in the picture. Something about the way the light catches his paws on the right of the picture distracts me from his face. If the angle was a little bit higher, you would have had all of his ears and less of the bedding. But nice shot of a beautiful kitty!!
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