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Fatima, if you want people to comment on your pictures, you need to follow the forum rules. You'll get a lot more help if you do that.Digital Photography School - Photography Forums - FAQ: Forum Rules
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I like the composition, but the picture is soft. You're shooting at f/2.8. So decide which bird you want to be sharp and focus on that bird (on its eye). If you want both of them in focus you're going to need a smaller aperture.
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I like the composition, but the picture is soft. You're shooting at f/2.8. So decide which bird you want to be sharp and focus on that bird (on its eye). If you want both of them in focus you're going to need a smaller aperture.
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