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[imaginationvault]

Really looking forward to receiving feedback, You can read so many books, but still critique that directly relates to something that you've done is priceless I find.

Thanks in advance



Pilanesburg National Park-South Africa-edit Antilope by Imagination Vault, on Flickr

Camera: D3100
Lens: 55-300mm f/4.5-5.6
ISo: 100
Focal Length: 220mm
Exposure Bias: 0.33 ev
Apature: f/5.3
Shutter Speed: 1/160

[Bruce A]

The only thing that spoils this great image a little imo, is the antelope entering the frame on the left. I'd try to clone him out - but you'll need to tread lightly. Fabulous lighting and comp otherwise. Great shot!

[imaginationvault]

Hi Bruce,

Thanks for your encouraging comments, I will give cloning out the antelope, it will be good practice if nothing else>

Thanks again,

Ian

[NgaiHill]

Agree with Bruce regards the antelope on the left. Instead of cloning try cropping the main antelope just behind his shoulder. You've already cut his legs off so a little more cropping won't hurt him!
A crop like this would make a more portrait orientation picture and give more focus to the subject.
Also agree with Bruce re great lighting - that was the first thing I noticed!