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I'm new in photography and actually this is the third picture i've ever taken in my entire life with a good camera. I would really love to know what u think about it.
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Old 05-25-2011, 07:28 AM
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Hi oxygen, welcome to DPS. I'm new too but to help you with your thread you need to read the critique rules and post your EXIF data. That way the very helpful people on here can help you evaluate your shot. What a gorgeous puppy, I love your shot.
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nice shot as you said that you new in photography and you did very good job
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Hi Oxygen,

I think ,you should increase DOF little more and take the puppy's full face in focus. For me, eyes must be in focus to connect with the photo of this kind. Good perspective though!
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Welcome,
It may help you to read the guidelines for posting int he critique section. They contain vital info that should be included (or not) in your posts. Please take a peek at them and edit your post. Thank you in advance for doing so!
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Old 05-26-2011, 01:28 PM
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You could use a change in focus point or a bit more depth of field here. Sometimes focusing on just the nose or other part can work, but in this case, the eye are so dominant that they really need to be in focus.
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