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Old 03-06-2011, 06:55 PM
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Hi!! Shot this curious birdie at the zoo. Would like your thoughts on composition and post-processing or on any other aspect of the photo which can be improved. TIA.

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Shutter: 1/30
Aperture: F/5.6
Focal Length: 55mm
ISO: 400
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Old 03-06-2011, 07:04 PM
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Interesting. To me it has a much darker feeling that curiosity. More like helplessness and despair.

the yellow on black is cool, and the eye peering through the hole is interesting, but at first glance I saw too much fence and not enough bird.
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Old 03-07-2011, 01:32 PM
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You'll probably get more replies if you post your photo here for us. It's much easier if we dont have to flip back and forth from one page to another
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The colors and contrast are great... I love the eye through the fence and the out-of-focus birds behind him.

But I found myself searching for the point of interest when I first pulled up the photo. I feel like the fence on the left is just dead space. Composition-wise, I'm not sure it's adding anything for me.
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Old 03-19-2011, 07:35 AM
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@ Jim Poor & jentenna : Thank you both for taking the time to comment. I framed the shot keeping in mind the rule of thirds, guess it dint work for this photo.
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