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Just recently got a dslr camera and would like your input on this picture I took. I think the composition is decent, but would love constructive criticism. Thanks


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Beautiful bird!
The biggest thing that bothers me is the space behind its head. I'd try cropping it down tighter both in the back as well as inthe front
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Beautiful macaw and a nice capture. I agree with windrider that a tighter crop would make this shot even better.
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Old 07-21-2010, 12:51 AM
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it's a good , but that the setting is less fog .. thanks for your work
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Beautiful bird!
The biggest thing that bothers me is the space behind its head. I'd try cropping it down tighter both in the back as well as inthe front
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Beautiful macaw and a nice capture. I agree with windrider that a tighter crop would make this shot even better.
Thank you all for taking the time to give me advise...it is greatly appreciated.
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