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I am new member to this forum and this is my first submission for your critique. I would appreciate all comments to improve my skills.
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First post! welcome aboard......you have a great little shot here capturing a great pose and the twinkle of its eye! Looking forward to other shots you will get
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Nice composition
I think it'll be better if the branch in the background is removed, make it a nice, clean, green background..
but that's if you have some time to play around with some image editing software, this version is already quite good
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amazing... I love it.
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