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Old 03-15-2010, 12:41 PM
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Exposure: 0.008 sec (1/125)
Aperture: f/2.5
Focal Length: 50 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
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Another picture of my dog,still trying to learn composition,exposure,and contrast,so c&c on those areas would be most helpful thanks
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Old 03-15-2010, 01:38 PM
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I like the close crop, and b&w seems to work well for this shot. However, there's a wide tonal range in the subject (quite harsh lighting), and on my monitor it looks like some of the highlights are blown, particularly right above the eye. Looks like a sweet dog, BTW.
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Old 03-19-2010, 11:22 PM
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Thanks for your comments Aegea
Here's a version based on your comments. I edited the RAW and add a ND filter effect,is it any better?
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The second version is much better!!
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Old 03-20-2010, 10:38 AM
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I noticed that the upper left corner and bottom right corner of the 2nd version seems a bit odd,so here's my 3rd version..
What to do...?v3
here's the 2nd version for easy comparison..
What to do...?v2
and here's the original..
What to do...?
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Old 03-20-2010, 04:50 PM
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The third version looks very nice - shows the advantages of shooting RAW!
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Old 03-21-2010, 04:02 AM
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Yep,I've shot in RAW for 2 months now,but this is the first time i realize the power of RAW!
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