Kiss....

[Art]

Hi all this kiss was taken with a traditional SLR camera Rebel G using Kodak Film Ultra 400, later scanned, so there is no EXIF to share

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

[Jim Poor]

Are you saying you don't have any record of shutter speed, aperture, etc?

The composition is OK, maybe a slight crop off the right, but the focus is totally missed and the white parts around the head of the blue one are completely blown measuring 255 in all three channels.

[Art]

Yes Jim, this pic was shot with tradutional camera and film, so I do not have that records
Thanks for your comments
Art

[PrimeTime]

Originally Posted by Art

Hi all this kiss was taken with a traditional SLR camera Rebel G using Kodak Film Ultra 400, later scanned, so there is no EXIF to share

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

Hi art, pretty birds. I think a vertical composition would have been better for this shot. By doing so, you could have included the tail of both birds.

You have a limb in the background that looks like it's coming out of the birds head. If you would have moved to the right, you could have avoided this distraction.

[Art]

yeah, Primetime, good catch, I did not notice when I shot
Thanks for your comments
Art