I'd like to add that when GIVING critique, it's completely unnecessary to be a pompous ass (and I've been seeing a lot of that lately). This is Digital Photography
School, and people are here to learn. Coming across as a know-it-all and insulting people (both the original poster and the members who have taken the time to comment) only makes you look like an idiot, no matter how much experience you have.
Off my soapbox now.