Yes, she does!
You're making great use of the shallow DOF with your 50mm. Again, I love the color processing. Mind telling us what you did to achieve that?
Cute smile, nice catchlights, and I really like how you framed this.
You'll find that this area of the DPS forums moves quite a bit more slowly than the critiques section, and you'll often get more specific comments on the aspects of the photo specific to portraiture. Welcome.