Hi, what a gorgeous baby. (Aren't they all?  )
I agree with Kbaby that the frame should be moved up so that your baby's head is lower in the image. The 'Rule of Thirds' says that a 'horizon' (which in this case would be the medial line across the face, through the nose, between the eyes etc) should be on a level that divides the top two-thirds of the image from the bottom third, or vice versa. Otherwise, great lighting, good focus, all in all a nice shot.
The grey line is an artefact of the current uploading problems with the site. Today's downtime was supposed to fix it, but it has now been put off until tomorrow.
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