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Old 01-31-2010, 06:10 AM
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The exposure is good, and the light looks great. Nice job with that.

The composition is kind of weak. You placed her the middle of the frame. I think it would have been more interesting if you used the fence as leading lines to her. That's just off the top of my head.

I think the Rule of Thirds would have helped you here.
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