[Kbaby]

Hi Chaoslillith,

I must say I love the concept of your image! It is a great idea for a photo and fantastic for a first attemp at a shoot.

I probably would have changed her angle though so she wasn't squinting so much... I saw you said it was shot on a very sunny day but the major squint to her eyes I find very unappealing and I might have chosen to show a bit more of her face (so I wasn't cropping our her lips) or shown a bit less (so you could only see her eyes).

I understand what you were trying to do with the dark/black fencing but find it too much of a contrast as I notice the fence more than her but think if you had of done either of the above it may have been a more powerful shot! (Note: I said may... this is just my opinion! =)

All round great shot though and I look forward to seeing more of your work!!

Kbaby