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First thought was, "Is that backdrop homemade?" It attracts attention, which could be lessened by moving subjects away from it more. A more flattering light could be placed on left side to better mold facial planes. An overhead (or backlight) could help give life and definition to hair. Small tilt of model's head could eliminate or reduce glare in glasses.
Most of all, focussing on eyes and getting as much light and sharpness there would have made all of the above a little less important.
In kindness, I suggest that a portrait crop would be more flattering. The portrait is about honest depiction of a person; everyone has a "best side" and can be placed in their "best light." For a beginning, you are on the right track. Some small changes and practice, and feedback from your subjects, will take you further.
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