It's a tough call. Because I have no strong preference as between the two, I would pick the first. You have finer eyelash detail that is lost in the processing of the second. In terms of composition, I would get rid of the dark object in the upper right corner. It adds nothing to the shot (unlike the bottle, which is great) and is a mild distraction. There's a little shadow in the lower cheek. I can't tell you what kind of lighting to use to remove it in this kind of shot, but ideally, I think you'd have a more even lighting for a baby shot of this nature.
It's a beautiful shot. I'd be happy to have taken it, very sweet. My critiques are simply a few ideas to consider in future shots.
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