Quick explaination..
I was trying to apply the rule of thirds as best as I could on this shot. The rule is just applied horizontally rather than vertically. I really like the picture but I know it can be improved on so I'm looking for your critique. I'm asking for critique here, not back slapping.
Does the application horizontally hold water or does it totally unbalance the photo?
Do I need more "base" for the photo?
Color or maybe B&W?
Feel free to copy and manipulate any way you want.
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