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Originally Posted by oldwolf
Here's my take on it:
Great model. Love her eyes. The picture needed to be cropped. The rule of thirds helps in this but know when to break the rules.
The background could be exposed a bit longer to get a nice white background. This is done with a longer shutter speed.
I cropped the picture, desaturated her skin a bit and added a little pop to her eyes as well as get rid of the dark circles under them. There were a few miscellaneous touchups as well like very slight skin smoothing and blemish removal but she has almost perfect skin so that wasn't really a big deal.
Next time I'd open up the shutter a bit longer to get a white background and not have her slouch. Need to sit up straight or even leaning back. Think dynamic lines. Dynamic lines are usually diagonal.
My experience? I have an opinion and I shoot people hehe.
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Thank you.
I did nothing to the picture, just posted it without any editing to get peoples takes on it.
I shall add some exposure to the background, or extract her to make a new one.
Thank you, I will let her know about the skin comments :P
thanks mate