First welcome to dps, lots of things you can learn here. Great website. However, do read the rules when requesting a critique, eg: including exif data to simplify critique.
Back to the pic, the horizon is tilted. It can be corrected by using software,( with a loss of some details), therefore try shooting it straight from the begining. Composition wise, the grass on the foreground doesn't help. Also some post processing can help enhance your pic, play with the levels and curves. Experiment. Interesting rock formation and the shadows are good.
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