For me there are 2 distracting elements - one is that there are only 3 feet shown and the brightness of the butterfly. Overall I like the position/composition of their heads and arms, you just need to make sure you can see some part of all of the legs/feet. I had twins myself so I know how tricky photographing them is (one was a lot bigger than the other!). Have you tried making this just a head shot, that may work well here too.
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