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Originally Posted by mpf777
Not a bad start, there are 2 things I am seeing though. One is the way the left wing is blocking the view of the body makes it a bit distracting. The other is that I think the focus is starting to drop off at the wing and I think it would be best to have it sharp.
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Couldnt have said it better myself. I do like the lighting on the concrete though. if the butterfly were fully focused, it would be a nice contrast.