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Old 11-05-2009, 07:25 AM
Lankey Lankey is offline
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Hi,
Well this is my first critique here, so i wouldn't take what i say very seriously as your idea of what works is probably better but anyway...

I really like the shot, there is something about the recked engine that draws me in, i think it is all the exposed wiring and perhaps the very yellowy rust.

Some things that could perhaps be improved (again take it with the grain of salt)..
I find the brightness of the sky behind abit distracting
Also you could of moved it to the side alittle so it is alittle less smack bang in the centre, though it certainly does not make the image worse in this case.

Another idea for might have been to get down alittle lower and move abit to the right so that the front bumper starts alittle more torwards the top left to lead the eye in more. That would of also leave you with less flare in the background.

But all in all, i think it is an interesting photograph and you have done very well!

Last edited by Lankey; 11-05-2009 at 07:28 AM.
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