[PhotoPhix]

Originally Posted by AndCity

My local camera club have a competition coming up for portraits so I thought I'd have a go. I have chosen two - one in black and white and the other in colour which can be viewed on my Flickr.

I'd be interested in any critique on how to improve or even tell me to start again!

I like the pose although in my opinion,the crop is too tight . There is also little contrast between the subject and the background. Also the subject could have used a bit more light.

Armando