Cute idea!
The horizon is a bit tilted, and the arm going across her body looks uncomfortable.
For her face/eyes, you can try the following trick. Create a new transparent layer. Use your paintbrush to paint white over the shadowed area. Do a very large Gaussian blur (around 200-300) on the painted layer. Then, either reduce the opacity of the painted layer or change the layer mode to overlay. You'll probably still need to dodge the eyes a bit to bring them out.
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