Firstly Jonny check out the FAQs about posting from Flickr. Then you can put an image here rather than expecting people to click for a link which many won't bother to do.
I think this one is the better composed of the two
The other one seems a little off balance.
You don't allow us to see your EXIF so no comment there. If you don't want it seen on flickr you should post the important numbers (ISO, Shutter Spped, Aperture, focal length) here.