[windrider86]

You havent done anything wrong. Just didnt include a few very important items. It is outlined int he guidelines about what you shoudl be putting into your posts.

Here are the main ones:

Exif information. knowing your camera settings can play a huge part in offering you possible alternate settings to improve your shots
Asking a specific question: Your asking others to to check out your image and give you critique. That takes time and effort. So in return, we ask you do the same. Take a look at your image and decide what it is you want help with. Perhaps you are wanting help with setting your depth of field to a different view than you have now. Perhaps you want help with composition or lighting.
See where I am going with this?