Here is the original, I think I see where you are going with this, I can already see that I could have salvaged some sharpness on the dog. I got ahead of myself with the effects and needed to focus more on the basic building blocks rather than the special effects. Feel free to play around with the original and post here in DPS. Thanks everyone
Oh yeah, you can see the leash in this one, since its shown, how did I do with removing it?