ok witout sounduing rude this is almost like a REALLY hard spot the difference without a close up it is sooo hadr to psot Ilike the shot overall but maybe a crop to remove some of the busyness from the top opf it ? as for the other posters I do agree a nice shot would be same pose but tighter focus she is a beautiful model with nice curvees would be nicely set off against the horizontal steps in a tight shot but this is great non the less ....
Ignore my non pro ideas I just thought oooooh I would do that but then I would probably leave the lens cap on too
