I would have had her sit more in the middle of the stairs and down a few steps. I would have used a longer lens if possible, the pose looks good but the kissing motion she is doing with her lips is pretty cliché I would have done with out this. After the change in perspective from moving her lower on the stairs so her head does not go over the last stair and the compression of the image when using a longer focal length. I would have also done a tighter crop to remove the background and railing since they distract from the model once these few things were modified. That's just my personal take on what I would have done with the location.
As for the post processing it looks better then the original but it's hard to comment here the images are pretty small, she doesn't fill much of the frame so a larger version is really needed here to properly see the edits that were done.
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