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Old 10-05-2009, 07:09 PM
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I like the processing and texture you used here. I think correcting the focus next time and moving the lock up just a little in the frame. As for the text I think the font and jagged edges of the font aren't really working here. I like the words and placement you choose. Perhaps finding a better font and going with bold will help draw the eye more toward the words. Right now with the lovely processing you did on the image the less the stellar word font selection looks like it was an after thought.

Nice work I really like the processing here. Thanks for sharing.
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