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Originally Posted by Bremer
Is this any better? Or does it look too retouched?

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I think it looks great. I see where Ken was going with his edit, but per others' feedback, I think the background clutter is best left darkened. I took a stab at the edit and pretty much came up with something similar to your results - I think yours looks better though. Mine came out a tad soft and less natural than yours.