I'm not a professional critic but the things that i notie about it are:
1. Lack of overall contrast.
2. My eye floats around the scene with no point to anchor the shot. ( this may be related to the lack of contrast.
Have you tried panning this shot? Keep focus on the truck while following it. Leasds to a blurred background.
Overall i feel the shot is about a 3.
It is worth posting on Flickr as you may recieve more comments.
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