[olgabe]

Hi! I'm looking for comments on this portrait, consisting of two frames taken a few minutes apart.
The idea is to have a close-up of the subject's face and then an environmental portrait next to it. I started making these series out of kid's portraits I've taken lately.
Do you think it's effective?

Another question is the close-up. I got this tendency to chop off chins and foreheads because I get in too close to maximize the eyes. Does the chopped off forehead bother you in this photo?

Thank you!