BryanC has a pretty good critique of the photo. I would recommend using a flash (off camera or on a bracket) or somehow getting more light on you subject. The focus point looks to have actually been just below the eyelet and with an aperture of 5.6 your DOF is quite short especially with a macro. More light and more depth of field which can be difficult in a macro shot. While it would have been a more ordinary shot, shooting with your subject(s) flat on the focus plane can help with this. I actually like that you caught the line of stitching and that line is matched by the eyelets. Focusing on these elements by moving them to more prominent positions might help. The last thing I'll mention is that the lace looping hanging into the photo is distracting especially with the limited depth of field. I know I often feel like I shouldn't disturb my subject but it never hurts to tidy if needed. Don't be afraid to reach out and "fix" the image. Especially a still life or object study.
Finally nice subject. I chose a pair of converse as a subject in a drawing course (mine were old and ratty) and understand the allure. They make excellent subjects. With a simplicity that is alluring and enough detail to captivate.
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