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Old 08-25-2009, 02:54 AM
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Default This is how I roll...

This is really only my tenth picture or so with my new camera. Macro has proven to be very enticing, so I could use a lot of advice.

Here is a composition I tried tonight:

I roll 20s

Canon XSi
50mm/F.18 II
Kenko 12mm Extension Tube
ISO 800
f5.6
.6 sec shutter
Tripod used with a cable release

I shot in low light with no flash as I wanted to get the dark colour of the wood without a lot of reflection. I tried with the flash as well but everything washed out.

So questions specifically:

On the composition, is it too busy? I was trying for a 'slice of life' picture, but I'm wondering if the book, pencil and other dice become too cluttered.

On the lighting, do low-light longer exposures like this work from, or is it too muddy?

Much obliged for any and all criticism and advice!
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