You did a good job of taking out one of the catchlights! Do you mean 'unnatural' because of the size of the catchlights in comparison to the size of his eyes or were you talking about the flat lighting causing the whole image to appear somewhat flat? Dimension is created through shadows and when you have flat lighting you eliminate many of the shadows that add to the character of a face.
I would work on reducung the size of the catchlights.
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Sincerely,
Lee -clockdoc-
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