As a picture of a cake, it is nice. Good colors, and all that. Perhaps try to include the bride and groom next time. You could have had the bride and groom's hands holding a cake cutter like impending motion at the upper right side to tie the cake into the ceremony. I would not have them cut it necessarily, but just to keep this from being a documentation of a cake, but of being comparing the beauty of the cake to the wedding itself.
Just me thinking out loud.
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